Kia Ora Everyone,
In cyber smart, we have been learning about how we can write a quilty comment and blog. In our last lesson, we were asked to make a Biteable to share how to make a quilty comment.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
In cyber smart, we have been learning about how we can write a quilty comment and blog. In our last lesson, we were asked to make a Biteable to share how to make a quilty comment.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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ReplyDeleteHello! I'm Ollie and I'm also from Marshland school. I really like this video because it does actually show people how to do a good quality comment! I really like the design you used for this video, I think this genuinely looks quite professional and well made. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteI came across this video while looking at other people's blogs and I am very impressed!
Hi Ollie,
DeleteI'm glad that you find this helpful.
-Joy.N