Kia Ora Everyone,
In literacy, we´ve been learning and writing about Anzac Day and all the people who died and survived in the war. We also had to do multiple activities like making a poem, making a family tree, and even make a recipe. But today I am sharing my writing about my own teddy and its adventure. I haven´t finished it but I am close.
We had to do so many activities with a minimum of seven and they took quite a while to finish but when you do more and more of it you can get more use to it.
I got all my task and information from:
Have you been learning about Anzac day? have you been writing about your own adventure?
Do you have any feedback for me?
Hey Joy Makenzie Here, I just wanted to say that your story is super cool and interesting. I love how you have put your story in to paragraphs so it is easier to read when it has to change setting. maybe next time you could put at lest 5 sentences in each paragraph it would be more interesting but other then that it was a pretty good story
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